Many thanks your comments/recommendations.
I agree with your suggestions except for 2 items.
Second Para under PROCEDURES you suggest
deleting "and the community" feeling the Board is responsible
for the community(?). The intent is that the Principal will communicate with the
community on such issues as bus warnings, bus suspensions and minor bus
Your comment about rules and regulations about
bus behavior...should these be part of the policy (currently are, I did not want
to make the email that voluminous) or are these administrative matters for the
Principal to handle?
I am incorportating all other changes and
waiting for other members responses.